12 August 2010

Haiku (first attempt)

Frightfully slight, our
fragile plight has left me torn
and without much faith.

2 comments:

  1. Wow! This is great--as usual!
    But I have to say, it's also quite sad...well done, there.
    This is Hiram, btw.

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  2. I know it's you, Hiram. And thank you! I didn't know how a haiku would turn out but I kind of like it.

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